Stedroy Looks like you you sneaked this one in. Generally, good work. there is a commitment to your concept and it shows in the volume of work posted. Clearly the entire programme was enclosed in your envelope and the adjacencies are quite logical and efficient. Ultimately, your interior renderings belie the shortcoming. It appears that the building did not progress past the first massing expression. While perhaps the exoskeleton can justify the exterior, the spaces inside are just there. There are no sectional relationships that make it more interesting or complex for lack of better articulation. In all, Kudos on the effort. you worked hard. I hope the jury receives/received it well.
It has been my pleasure keeping up with your work this semester.
Thanks alot Mr Fastman, I ran out of time to really make the interior pop to the full potential. I appreciate all the comments from you this semester because really made me rethink certain aspects of my design. The jury was mostly pleased but his comment was on how I can focus more on the flow and connections to the circulation path throughout my site and building, and how I can connect them for a better overall design.
OK, I will keep you posted. No problem, and thanks for the hospitality. If you ever find yourself in St. Kitts & Nevis, West Indies, let me know @ stedroy.brand@gmail.com
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ReplyDeleteLooks like you you sneaked this one in. Generally, good work. there is a commitment to your concept and it shows in the volume of work posted. Clearly the entire programme was enclosed in your envelope and the adjacencies are quite logical and efficient. Ultimately, your interior renderings belie the shortcoming. It appears that the building did not progress past the first massing expression. While perhaps the exoskeleton can justify the exterior, the spaces inside are just there. There are no sectional relationships that make it more interesting or complex for lack of better articulation. In all, Kudos on the effort. you worked hard. I hope the jury receives/received it well.
It has been my pleasure keeping up with your work this semester.
Thanks alot Mr Fastman, I ran out of time to really make the interior pop to the full potential. I appreciate all the comments from you this semester because really made me rethink certain aspects of my design. The jury was mostly pleased but his comment was on how I can focus more on the flow and connections to the circulation path throughout my site and building, and how I can connect them for a better overall design.
Deletemy pleasure. Please keep me posted with your progress. If ever you find yourself in LA, please let me know.
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OK, I will keep you posted. No problem, and thanks for the hospitality. If you ever find yourself in St. Kitts & Nevis, West Indies, let me know @ stedroy.brand@gmail.com
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